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In Motion by bee-eye In Motion by bee-eye
The Sheikh Zayed Road in motion at the rush hour!
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There are a lot of strong features of this picture: great colors, appropriately chosen exposure, very good sharpness and tonal curve. It definitely has a wow effect as well and the bluish trails on the highway add up to the originality.

My biggest problem though is cropping. I think the large dark area on the right is unnecessary. The tall skyscraper on the left is cut off in the middle in a somewhat random spot. The building in the very center of the foreground detracts from a highway junction which is the main topic of this photograph.

I think that including all of the skyscraper on the top-left corner and placing foreground building halfway between right edge and where it is now would make this picture better.

Overall as I said, this image has a lot of strengths and my main reservation is the cropping.

cheers
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A very long light way;) (Wink) 
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GODFOOTSTEPS Jul 7, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
nice
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bee-eye Oct 13, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
thank you!
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Vocalkokoro Jul 5, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Beautiful. <3
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:iconnaniska:

Fabulous colours!
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:icondescriptio:
Your work is impressive ! This perspective and these colors... splendid ! ^^
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jaelise Jun 20, 2013   Photographer
Your beautiful work has been featured here [link] :heart: :aww:
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:iconnudagimo:
This image is brillant! :clap:
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bee-eye Mar 10, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
Thanks!
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:iconnudagimo:
My pleasure!
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